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    "Apart" Chapter 3 (中文翻譯之吐血倒地版?!)

    這次也把英文版的給貼上了,如果有可以改進的地方歡迎大家來討論!!
    (我承認奇摩字典是好物)(炸飛)

    --
    “This is it.” The female wolf fur thought, as she standing in front of an abandoned building that looks aged and wrecked. She opens the heavy wooden door, and step in. Inside the building there is a big hole, about 15 ft in diameter, located on the floor. It looks dark and deep. She took a breath, and jump in.
    「是這了。」她──一名母性的狼獸人──正要踏進一棟廢棄、看上去老舊而搖搖欲墜的建築時心想。她推開笨重的木門,然後踏入。地上有個直徑約十五呎的大洞,看下去既深遂又黑暗。她吸了口氣,然後跳了下去。


    “Hey, you know what? I should show some of my appreciation to you for making us standing in a cold weather and wait for the bus while we can just “pop” our self back to academy.” I said in one breath, and tried to make myself feel warmer by standing closer to Ivan.
    「嘿,你知道嗎?你讓我們站在這種冷得要命的地方等著公車而不是『碰』一聲直接傳送回去的行為還真值得讓我對你致上我的感謝。」我一口氣說完,然後跟伊凡湊近以讓我身子溫暖點。

    “Is not all my fault… you should had reminded me earlier~” Ivan responded with a shaking tone. He is now hugging his brother so they both won’t freeze to death.
    「又不全是我的錯……你應該早點提醒我的。」伊凡以顫抖的聲音回道,。他抱著我,免得凍死在這。

    It is 11:38 at night. No one is standing in the long-standing bus stop except Ivan and Dexter. The bus arrived at 11:40, and they found themselves hardly moving to the bus because the weather had already turned them into ice statues.
    現在是晚上十一點三十八分。伊凡和德克斯特待在空無一人的,有著相當多空位的公車站前。公車在兩分鐘後來到;當他們要上公車時,才發現自己已經快變成兩具冰雕,差點動彈不得。

    “Way to ‘learned more about human’s way of living’” I said, and put our luggage into the compartment on top of our seats.
    「好一個『學到人類的生活方式』。」我說,將行李放到座位上方的小空艙。
    “…”
    「……」

    “What is it?” I asked, and looked at Ivan. He stares back to me.
    「怎麼了?」我看著伊凡問道。他直盯著我。

    “I think you have something wants to tell me.” Ivan said. “Say it before you forget it.”
    「你有什麼事要跟我說吧?」他說。「在你忘記前先說了吧。」

    “…ok, fine.” I answered. “But how did you know…”
    「……喔,好吧。」我回道。「但是你是怎麼知道……」

    “I wasn’t drunk~ just tell me what did he asked you to do~?”
    「我是假裝醉倒的。先告訴我他說了什麼?」

    “He asked me to give a letter to a transfer student in the academy, and promised me 5000 credits as a reward. He gave me 1000 credits already” I stated. “I guess he told you the same thing he told me, right?”
    「他要我將一封信轉送給一名學院新來的轉學生,而且答應我會給予五千信用點(註:信用點即為這個世界的交易單位)作為獎賞。他已經先給我一千信用點了。」我說明。「我猜他跟你說過同樣的話,對吧?」

    “Yes, but his offer was 4000 credits…ar well, I knew you are gonna come, so I just act like I got drunk and wait for you to accept the offer instead~ but sweet, now we get 1000 credits more…”
    「沒錯,但是他只說要給四千信用點……隨便啦,反正我知道你會來,所以我就假裝醉倒,等你來接下這個要求。不過也太棒了,我們現在多了一千信用點……」

    “Why didn’t you take that job by yourself?”
    「你為什麼不自己接下來就好了?」

    “Because I don’t like reasonability~ beside either one of us finished it we both get the reward…but if you mass it up than it will be your fault~” Ivan started his lazy tone again. “Don’t worry bro~ I will help you. Let me take a look of that letter…”
    「因為我不像你那麼有責任感。更何況只要我們其中一人完成任務,我們兩個都有獎賞拿……如果你搞砸了,那也只有你要承擔責任。」伊凡那副慵懶的口氣又再度出現。「別擔心兄弟,我會幫你的。先讓我看一眼信……」

    So I take out the letter from my pocket, and mysteriously it didn’t get wrinkled. As Ivan receives the letter, he looks at it utterly without open it. Five minutes later he said: “…we should get away of it as soon as possible. There is a curse on the letter and who ever open it without the code, will die painfully. Don’t worry~ I can break the curse” He said immediately when I give him a frightened face. “But just to show our manner, we better just leave it this way.”
    所以我就從口袋裡掏出那封信,很神奇地發現它並沒有任何折損。伊凡接過信,在沒有打開的情況下徹底檢查一遍。過了五分鐘,他說道:「……我想我們應該早點擺脫這玩意。這封信被下了詛咒,任何沒有解咒的人打開了只會痛苦的死去。不過別擔心,我能把詛咒解掉。」他在我露出驚恐的表情時立刻說道。「不過為了表現我們應該有的禮貌,不要亂動會比較好。」

    “…Alright.” I said. “I will just found that transfer student and give that to her…I wonder what is in the letter though.”
    「……好吧。」我說。「我會盡快找到那位轉學生然後把這給她……雖然我是很好奇信的內容就是。」

    “I don’t know either, but is none of our business.” Ivan mumbled, than look up to the dark sky.
    「我也不知道,不過這也不關我們的事。」伊凡咕噥,看著漆黑的天空。
    --

    The bus stopped at a small town named “Clayton”. It is about 20 minutes walk away from the academy, and I don’t usually come down here because I dislike the human in the town look at me with strange sight. It is 1:04 already so no one is on the street, not until we reach to the other side of the town. I saw three guys smoking at the corner of the street, wearing a heavy jacket, properly gangsters.
    公車在一個名喚「克萊頓」的小鎮前停下。這裡距學院大約有二十分鐘路程;我不常駐足此地,因為我不喜歡鎮上的人們以異樣眼光盯著我看。現在已經凌晨一點零四分,街上看不到任何人影,直到我們到達城鎮的另一端。我看到三人穿著厚夾克在街角抽著菸。十足的混混模樣。

    “Hey you!” one of the stranger yelled at us as we walk by. “What the hell are you looking at? Oh…look at that…two little doggy walking on the street~ how cute.”
    「喂,就是你!」其中一名陌生人在我們走過時叫囂。「你們他媽的在看哪啊?喔,瞧瞧他們……兩隻小狗狗走在街上呢,真是可愛。」

    “Doggy”…this word went though my head.
    「小狗狗」……這個字眼直貫進我的頭。
    “Ivan, wait for me at the place, I will be there shortly.”
    「伊凡,在這裡等我,我馬上回來。」

    Ivan look at me, than look at the gangsters, than say: “You got it man~ see you later~”
    伊凡看我,又看看那些混混,然後說道:「我瞭了,等會見。」他轉向混混。「希望你們別掛了啊。」
    “What the fxxk are you talking about” the gangster responded, but Ivan just walk away.
    「媽的,你們在說什麼啊?」一名混混回道,但伊凡逕自走開。

    “So, where were we? Oh yeah…” I said. “What did you call me again?”
    「嗯,我們說到哪了?喔,對了……」我說。「你剛剛叫我什麼?」

    “I said you are little • sissy • doggy~ you fool~” the gangster said, using a childish tone, and the other start laughing, “and you fxxking think that you can take me down huh? Don’t call your mama when you get hurt~ hahaha~”
    「你這個娘娘腔小狗狗,你這白癡!」那名混混用相當幼稚的口氣說道,其餘兩人笑了起來。「而你去他的以為你撂得倒我?別在你受傷的時候跑去找你媽媽哭訴啊,哈哈哈!」

    “Same to you.” I said, and drew a 5 pointed star. “Ancient Spirits…listen to my request: Summon-Skeleton Warrior!”
    「你也一樣。」我說,然後畫了一個五芒星。「上古精魂,訴請聽從我的要求──召喚邪骸戰士!」

    A greenish light shoot though the ground and created a 5 points star in front of where I standed, and than a radius of a skeleton try to climb up from the ground. 3 seconds later a living skeleton stand straight up from the soil and holding a sword above its collarbone in front of me.
    綠光閃過,在我前方地上築起了一個五角星星,在星芒籠罩的範圍內出現了一名骷髏;三秒過後,一隻將劍架在鎖骨上,活生生的邪骸戰士挺立在我面前。

    “yo…check this out~ a necromancer, let’s see what can a doggy do!” One of the gangster said, and pull out their weapons. Two of them took out a heavy stick and one carry a gun, standing in the back and point it right at Dexter’s head.
    「喔,看看這個--一名死靈法師呢!就讓我看看一隻小狗狗能有什麼能耐!」那些混混說道,拔出他的武器。一人拿出笨重的棍子,另一名則持槍站在德克斯特背後,槍口正對頭部。

    “…Bone Bunker!” Dexter use his special trick, which is a magic that will create a indestructible bone shield around the caster for a short period of time. It had successfully blocked the bullet shoot from the gun.
    「……骨牆!」德克斯特使出了獨門伎倆,一堵由魔力製造而成的堅固屏障,可以在施術者周圍持續一小段時間。這招也成功地擋下了射來的子彈。

    The Skeleton Warrior is under attack by two gangsters with a heavy stick, and plus the gun fire in the back, it is destroyed and turns into bone pieces on the ground. But another Skeleton shows up again from the pervious summon circle with a war hammer. It strongly swung his hammer to the two gangsters who were using a heavy stick; they got take to the air, smash on the wall, and made a deep hole of a shape of two men.
    我召喚出來的邪骸戰士在那些混混前有棍棒重擊,後有子彈破壞下終於崩毀成一堆塌在地上的骨頭。然而立刻就有另一隻新的,手持戰錘的邪骸戰士取代了原先的位子。戰錘掃蕩,砍向那兩名持棍的混混;只看到他們被擊向空中,撞向牆壁,在牆上穿出兩個人形的大洞。

    The guy in the back throws his gun to the Skeleton Warrior, but that didn’t stop its movement toward to him.
    站在戰士後面的持槍者將槍丟向它,但這也無法阻擋下邪骸戰士持續向他逼近。

    “Tough doggy~ better watch out~!” He screamed. “Fire Blast!”
    「了不起的小狗狗,最好小心點!」他大喊。「烈炎衝擊!」

    The Skeleton Warrior falls apart as the fire, shoot from the gangster’s hand, touch it, so is the Bone Bunker. Dexter was shocked in that moment because he didn’t expected to face a Sorcerer (Magician that master on elemental magic), but than he put himself together again and ready for a serious fight.
    邪骸戰士在從那名混混射出的火燄侵襲下崩潰,而骨牆也面臨了相同的命運。德克斯特感到一陣驚慌,因為他並沒有預料自己會面對一名元素師(即操控元素的巫師)。不過他立刻恢復鎮定,並且準備好對上一場較具挑戰性的戰鬥。

    “I was surprised too, when I know I have to use magic after all~” said by the gangster, and takes out a wand from his pocket. “you are DEAD!”
    「當我發現你也會魔法的時候,老實說我也很驚訝呢。」那名混混說道,從口袋中取出了他的手杖。「這下你死定了!」

    “Will see about that!” Dexter shouted. In the mean time another Skeleton Warrior shows up from the summon circle, and it carries a long metal chain.
    「那我們就看著辦吧!」德克斯特叫道。同時另一名邪骸戰士從召喚陣出現,還拿著一條長長的鐵鍊。

    “Is that all you can do? I didn’t even use my wand to cast Fire Blast and it turns your skeleton into dust~” the gangster speak, with an overconfident face.
    「你就只能這樣嗎?我都還沒用我的手杖施展烈焰衝擊來把你那些骨頭燒成灰燼呢!」這名混混以一種過度自信的口氣說道。

    “Maybe you can take care of one at a time, but what about 100?” I asked. “You are lucky enough to see my next trick…” I take out a sliver dagger, and cut a wound on my finger. Scarlet blood comes out immediately. “…but I don’t think you are lucky enough to live though it.”
    「也許你一隻一隻來的話還打得過,但如果是一百隻一起上呢?」我問道。「你很幸運,可以看到我的下一招……」我取出一把銀製匕首,在手指上切出一道傷口,而腥紅的鮮血立刻冒了出來。「……而我不認為你幸運到可以活得下來。」

    “Shut the fxxk up! Fire Ball!”
    「你他X的閉嘴!火球術!」

    “INFERNO RECKLESS SUMMON!!”
    「煉獄──極限召喚!」

    Dexter hit his wounded hand with blood on the ground. A green lightning blast through the soil to form the “Necronomicon Gate”, and the circle had covered the whole area where Dexter and the enemy are standing. Later a humming sound comes out from underground, which is the voice of hundred of Skeleton Warriors climbing through the soil for battle. All this skeletons rise at once. Some of them had block the Fire Ball attack, and the other start engaging the Sorcerer.
    德克斯特將滿是鮮血的手打在地上。綠光灌注在地,逐漸構築成「死靈大門」,擴散的大圈最後將德克斯特和他的敵人所佔的位置給包圍住。不久,地下傳來了嗡嗡的聲響,而這也是上百名邪骸戰士突破大地,投身戰鬥的象徵。一時間,所有的骸骨盡數出現;有些擋下了火球的攻擊,而其他的開始朝術士進攻。
    --

    “You done? That was fast,” Ivan said, standing next to an abandoned building that looks aged and wrecked. “You should found out that there is a Sorcerer in the gang, right?”
    「結束了?還真快啊。」伊凡說道,站在一棟廢棄、看上去老舊而搖搖欲墜的建築旁。「你應該有發現其中一名混混是個術士,沒錯吧?」

    “Ya, thanks for not telling me, so I can risk my life to found out he can use fire magic.” I said with a tired tone. “Anyway, that was a good training on my summoning skill…and reminded the people not to call me ‘doggy’”
    「是啊,還多謝你沒有告訴我,這樣我就有機會冒著生命危險應付他的火系法術。」我疲憊地說道。「無論如何,這場戰鬥也有好好訓練到我的召喚技巧……還有提醒人們別叫我『小狗狗』。」

    “Bro…sometime you are just over reacted.” Ivan said, and opens the heavy, wooden door of the building.
    「老弟……有時候你只是過度反應罷了。」伊凡說道,推開那扇笨重的木門,踏入廢棄的建築。
    --

    期待第四章啊XD
    btw, 髒話真的很不好翻,沒有經驗所以不知道要放句子的哪裡(炸)


    頭圖謝謝雞腿子wwwww
    這嘴巴超萌!(炸

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    奇摩字典真的是好物 XD

    没想到逆狼会替偶的名词想中文名称呢~~ 偶写的时候完全没有想过中文名=_=" 先谢过

    偶也很希望有别的兽可以给偶一些意见...>"< 但好像没人理

    第四集正以"吐血倒地"的速度进行中, 要是弄好了就会马上放上来 不过,又是没人理的了= (

    P.S 小混混的对白很难写耶~ orz


    huh?

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