[英文]Let Me Call You Brother

[神原明野]

此段文字純屬虛構，如與人事時地物雷同實屬巧合


I don't know the time when I start feeling lonely,

The feeling didn't disappear until you stand beside me.

For me, there's no location I can always be.

Since you led me, I found that everything became easy.



How I wish I could become your young brother,

But it never comes true 'cause of the serious ruler.

I just wanna communicate with you forever,

Why don't you let me call you brother?



Do you know how much I want a shelter?

Do you know how much I desire your favor*?

But you're always acting like a reflector,

Which denied anything I wanna do with you ever.



I wanna join into your friendship member,

I desire becoming your relationship member,

Just let me lean on your shoulder,

Let me call you brother,

If you accept, it'll become better.


註釋：favor(n.):贊同，寵愛

[Triumph]

是歌詞嗎?(我看到了wanna)

多看一眼,是這類意思嗎?

文字簡潔有力,看得很舒服~

不過歌詞可以短而多,會比較容易唱)

[瀟湘]

How wonderful it is!
感得到深深的依戀和被迫分別的不捨。
通篇押韻，加上偏長的句子所營造的緩慢抒情，真是好詩！

[tsume]

有點小小文法+詞態錯誤
不過是一首好詩~
情境很動人,讓讀者彷彿能體會作者的心情,很動人
真的很像歌詞呢^^~

[神原明野]

>>小爪

通常"歌詞"這種文體，在英文是常常出現辭態&文法錯誤的情況呢
當然，是為了要押韻了
而且這真的是歌詞，是明野通勤時想到的


>>Triumph

歌詞或詩詞為了方便頌唱，會採用大量的口語修飾
wanna即等於want to，gonna即等於go to



其實這歌詞還有第二段



Some thing have been changed since you appear

I used to do anything by myself before

Foe me, I had have to live in fear

Since you led me, I won't get lost anymore.



How I wish you could become my older brother

But I'm afraid of ask it for your relationship leader

I just wanna do anything with you together

Why can't we call each other brother?




Do you know how much I need a cover?

I look like a naked wolf without you supporter

Why I mustn't reach you because of your honor

Make me feel terribly chilly in the summer



Give me a chance, I'll behave better

I desire to become your relationship member

Please let me lie with your nature

Let me call you brother

I won't quit pleading until you realize* my picture*.




Word bank:
realize(vt.):使…成真
picture(n.):想像；願望

[Freelancer]

有嚇到!! 我居然可以一邊讀著歌詞一邊唱出來, 而且沒有音樂說~!!

要是我會寫曲就好了 OTZ
---
要注意像 'disappear, Reflector, Communicate" 這類有 3 到 5 個音的字哦, 唱出來的時候要和音樂合到才可以~ XD

[神原明野]

有嚇到!! 我居然可以一邊讀著歌詞一邊唱出來, 而且沒有音樂說~!!

要是我會寫曲就好了 OTZ
---
要注意像 'disappear, Reflector, Communicate" 這類有 3 到 5 個音的字哦, 唱出來的時候要和音樂合到才可以~ XD

PS-
在英文歌曲中，有所謂的「子母頭尾相連」的規矩喔

意思是如果歌詞中，有出現母音開頭的字，那麼前一個字的字尾發音

就要直接連到母音的開頭

舉例說明： 拿艾薇兒的一首歌：

Chill out what you're yelling for? Let back, it's all be done before.

實際上要唱成這樣：

Chillout whatre yelling for? Let back, it'sall be done before.

有時候有人會覺得英文歌難唱，不對拍，就是這個原因的


明野更厲害的是，可以用十數種旋律搭這首歌，而且感覺不變

[a70701111]

英文阿！！(吐血倒地)
這篇對在下而言，是絕對性的看不懂阿……
自己的破英文拿五色石也補不起來。
希望有獸可以幫忙翻譯阿……(淚奔)

[神原明野]

版主，這篇文章還是不要亂翻譯的好……



完整翻出的同時就是明野壽命終結之時



(死因是被一連串輿論壓力精神轟炸而死)

[好喝的茶]

完全押韻，真正嚇倒茶了(汗)。
這到底是何等神的英文底子(遠目)？

不過可以試著多押不同的音。
總是在押-er的音節，讀起來氣氛便會低沈了(炸)。

TO　小迪版主︰
英文詩詞是很難翻譯成中文的。
一來是中英文文法差甚遠，
二來押英文字韻跟押中文字韻不同。

所以，還是乖乖用字典查字吧(炸)。

意譯的話大概還可以……(遠目)
不過我的英文水平也好不了到哪裏去(死)。
還是請明野大意譯一下比較好？
不過，為什麼明野會說，翻譯出來會被輿論啊(抓頭)？