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    第一次寫小文-"Apart"


    Apart
    Book of Darkness

    Character Bio:
    Dexter J. William- a wolf fur with white, soft fur who is main character of this story. He has the age of 17 and his birthday is Dec 19,1989. As a 2nd Grader in the Academy of Necromancer and Witchcraft, he is good at Combat Theory.
    Ivan J. William- wolf furs with white, soft fur, but longer than his bother’s. His hair had covered half of his right face and a scar of his left arm. He has the age of 19 and his birthday is Dec 19, 1987. As a 4th Grader in the Academy of Necromancer and Witchcraft, he is talented on both Summoning Technique and Spell Casting (his spell casting and summoning technique courses were 6th grader lever)
    Mr. And Miss William- Dexter and Ivan’s parents, who is now living in Iceland, studying ancient runes.

    Chapter 1: The Past

    It is eleven o’clock at night; a pair of wolf furs with white, soft fur standing in the corner of an abandon park, whispering to each other. They tried to hide themselves in the back of a broken “Mary-goes-around”, the rusty horses and kaput chairs makes it look scary and creepy instead of happy.

    “Why did you give me this mask?” Dexter asked, and he received a skull-like mask from his brother.
    “Ha. It will make you stronger~ don’t you see? It has mysterious power on it, and the power will help you summon a stronger monster easier.” Ivan said, but Dexter doesn’t believe him at all.
    “Liar~ If it has special power on it, than why didn’t you use it~? Is not like you are so tough that you don’t need any ancient artifact to help you summon~”
    “Shut up, you never saw me when I summoned the skeleton worriers against Sliver~ I bet you will pee your pant when you see them coming right at you~”
    “Yeah-right~ is just because you take higher level of summoning in academy, doesn’t mean you are so much better than me….”
    “Shhh… here he comes.” Ivan stops my argument. A tiger fur sneaking out from a black, aged building not far form where we hiding.

    My name is Dexter J. William, and my brother, Ivan J. William; is a 4th grader in the Academy of Necromancer and Witchcraft while I am a 2nd grader. This academy teaches their students not only the basic elemental magic, but also necromantic magic, which is consider as “Dark Magic”. We enroll in the same class together, live together, eat together, and sleep together ever since the first day of the academy. Our parent, however, were researching ancient runes at Iceland, and they usually send us some money plus a letter about their living every single two months.
    We had received our mid-term project from the academy: Take down a rank E-Easy convict, and bring him/her police without letting anyone knows you are a necromancer. Our target is, lucky, an escaped convict who doesn’t have any combat skill. The only tough part is he is really agile enemy and if we let him escape again, we will never able to find him.

    “You sure this is him, right?” I questioned, and take a picture of a tiger fur, which is the convict. “His name is John… and the memo said we have to beware of his high speed.”
    “You got it……hey, you want to know why I picked this guy as our mid-term project?” He asked, looks like he is up to something.
    “Don’t know, why?” I said, “I did actually thought about it……our speed is not faster than the other, than why should we pick a fast target?”
    “True.” He smiled “But he doesn’t know any combat/magic skill, right? So as long as we can trap him, we will get an A+ for sure~”
    “And how can you do that? Is not like he will just stand there and let you capture him like a statue.”
    “That’s the point. I can’t turn him into a statue, but I can limited his movement and slow him down with some new tricks~” He said, and pull out a notebook he use to have with him. It recorded everything he learns in the academy, but only the student in the academy can understand it because it is written with codes.

    He keeps turning the pages back and forward, and as he doing that the tiger fur is walking away from the park.
    “Hey! He is getting away. Aren’t you going to do something about it?” I questioned, hoping my brother actually knows what he is doing.
    “……and there.” Ivan said as he founded the page he was looking for. “So what did you say again? Bro”
    “He is getting away!”
    “No bro, he is walking to us.”
    “What are you talking about? He is heading to the exit…”
    “And that is exactly where the trap is placed” He put his notebook on the moistly ground, and casting a magic spell and I never saw. First he drew a normal triangle enchantment (designed for magic involved with blocking attack), than he drew some intricate symbols on top of the enchantment. This symbols releases some greenish light in the mid air as he drawing it. This enchantment was so complicated that in the end I don’t understand the effect of it at all. No wonder why he is three levels ahead of me in both Spell Casting and Summoning Technique.

    “Now, observe.” He said, with a gentle voice. “Seal!”
    All the sudden, the ground where Ivan is standing had raised the same magic circle he draw with an earsplitting sound, like thunder. Thousand of greenish laser blast from the circle directly to where the tiger fur’s location, and created the same magic circle to the one that Ivan standing on. The tiger fur was shocked by it and try to escape, but the circle had already fastened the area and nothing can move nor activate. All of this just happens in 10 seconds.

    “……wow” I shocked, like the tiger fur in the circle. “How did you do……you just take him down in like one second!”
    “You see? That’s the whole point. If he would know magic, he maybe able to break though it, but he doesn’t.” Ivan said, with dramatic voice “ Beside, is not like anyone can break though this circle with some simple spells, so I really don’t care which convict we pick, I will still use the same technique.” He smiled again, “Learn from the M-a-s-t-e-r”
    “Shut up~ stop act like you are the know-it-all.” I said, as we walking toward to the tiger fur, which is helplessly trying to escape. Although I didn’t say it, but I was really suspires by his ability and talent. I never saw him in a mission or combat so I don’t really know what he is like in a battlefield, but I am now sure that he is a tough enemy to deal with compare to his age.

    After we turn that convict (later we found out that he is a thief) to the policeman, no one believe what he said about seeing two wolf furs castled a green magic circle to surrounded him and trap him. Except the police officer (a human of course) look at us differently, everything looks normal.
    “Mission accomplished! Now let see…we used 13 minute 45 second on the mission while the academy give us 18 hours, so we still have……how much time left for fun?” He asked me.
    “17 hours 46 minutes 15 second” I answered. “you got to work on your math skill, Ivan, or you will failed the Combat Theory course.”
    “Whatever…that course is stupid, who cares about how long it takes to summon 15 skeleton worriers and 5 skeleton guard with those stupid technique, or how much MP it takes to do so~”
    “It takes 20 seconds to summon the first skeleton worriers, and time required increase 1.2 times for the next one, so it should takes….” I answered, while think the answer. “…About 1535.7 second, which is about 25 minutes.”
    “You see bro? That’s where you talent is. Thank god I have you as my bro so I never have to worry about my theory project~” Ivan said, with a face of appreciation on.

    We walk back to the hotel and rest a while. I put the mask into my bag and fall asleep as I touched the bed, so is my brother.

    Apart-Book Of Darkness-Chapter 1 end.

    This is my first time ever writing a essay....so thank you for reading it and please let me know if there is any thing needs to be improved ^^"

    中文翻译

    P.S perhaps I should descripte the phyical appearance in detail for the next chapter...@@


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    Hey, it is interesting essay. I would like to know what happen to them after this.

    By the way, what is "skeleton worries"?

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    引用 作者: MINE
    Hey, it is interesting essay. I would like to know what happen to them after this.

    By the way, what is "skeleton worries"?

    Error Fixed. Thanks for "MINE"


    That's......great! you found a spelling error~! =_="

    Skeleton Worriers - A skeleton, formed by the spirits of the anicent worriers, that will fight on yourside to death if summoned successfully. They will carry weapon they use in the pervious battle. Will be taught in Summoning Tech. Lv.2. This skill is not only just to summon a "bone shield" for you, but is for you to use it as your "chess pieces on the battlefield". Note: After Potion&Poison Lv.2, you will be taught how to turns your skeleton's weapon into a disease carrier.


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