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    第一次寫小文-"Apart"-Book Of Darkness-Chapter 3


    Apart
    Book of Darkness

    Character Bio:
    Dexter J. William- a wolf fur with white, soft fur who is main character of this story. He has the age of 17 and his birthday is Dec 19,1989. As a 2nd Grader in the Academy of Necromancer and Witchcraft, he is good at Combat Theory.

    Ivan J. William- wolf furs with white, soft fur, but longer than his bother’s. His hair had covered half of his right face and a scar of his left arm. He has the age of 19 and his birthday is Dec 19, 1987. As a 4th Grader in the Academy of Necromancer and Witchcraft, he is talented on both Summoning Technique and Spell Casting (his spell casting and summoning technique courses were 6th grader level)

    Mr. And Miss William- Dexter and Ivan’s parents, who is now living in Iceland, studying ancient runes.

    Chapter 1: The Past
    Chapter 1中文版by逆狼
    Chapter 2: The Past (2)

    Chapter 3: The Past (3)

    “This is it.” The female wolf fur thought, as she standing in front of an abandoned building that looks aged and wrecked. She opens the heavy wooden door, and step in. Inside the building there is a big hole, about 15 ft in diameter, located on the floor. It looks dark and deep. She took a breath, and jump in.
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    “Hey, you know what? I should show some of my appreciation to you for making us standing in a cold weather and wait for the bus while we can just “pop” our self back to academy.” I said in one breath, and tried to make myself feel warmer by standing closer to Ivan.

    “Is not all my fault… you should had reminded me earlier~” Ivan responded with a shaking tone. He is now hugging his brother so they both won’t freeze to death.

    It is 11:38 at night. No one is standing in the long-standing bus stop except Ivan and Dexter. The bus arrived at 11:40, and they found themselves hardly moving to the bus because the weather had already turned them into ice statues.

    “Way to ‘learned more about human’s way of living’” I said, and put our luggage into the compartment on top of our seats.

    “…”

    “What is it?” I asked, and looked at Ivan. He stares back to me.

    “I think you have something wants to tell me.” Ivan said. “Say it before you forget it.”

    “…ok, fine.” I answered. “But how did you know…”

    “I wasn’t drunk~ just tell me what did he asked you to do~?”

    “He asked me to give a letter to a transfer student in the academy, and promised me 5000 credits as a reward. He gave me 1000 credits already” I stated. “I guess he told you the same thing he told me, right?”

    “Yes, but his offer was 4000 credits…ar well, I knew you are gonna come, so I just act like I got drunk and wait for you to accept the offer instead~ but sweet, now we get 1000 credits more…”

    “Why didn’t you take that job by yourself?”

    “Because I don’t like reasonability~ beside either one of us finished it we both get the reward…but if you mess it up than it will be your fault~” Ivan started his lazy tone again. “Don’t worry bro~ I will help you. Let me take a look of that letter…”

    So I take out the letter from my pocket, and mysteriously it didn’t get wrinkled. As Ivan receives the letter, he looks at it utterly without open it. Five minutes later he said: “…we should get away of it as soon as possible. There is a curse on the letter and who ever open it without the code, will die painfully. Don’t worry~ I can break the curse” He said immediately when I give him a frightened face. “But just to show our manner, we better just leave it this way.”

    “…Alright.” I said. “I will just found that transfer student and give that to her…I wonder what is in the letter though.”

    “I don’t know either, but is none of our business.” Ivan mumbled, than look up to the dark sky.

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    The bus stopped at a small town named “Clayton”. It is about 20 minutes walk away from the academy, and I don’t usually come down here because I dislike the human in the town look at me with strange sight. It is 1:04 already so no one is on the street, not until we reach to the other side of the town. I saw three guys smoking at the corner of the street, wearing a heavy jacket, properly gangsters.

    “Hey you!” one of the stranger yelled at us as we walk by. “What the hell are you looking at? Oh…look at that…two little doggy walking on the street~ how cute.”

    “Doggy”…this word went though my head.

    “Ivan, wait for me at the place, I will be there shortly.”

    Ivan look at me, than look at the gangsters, than say: “You got it man~ see you later~” Ivan answered, and turns to the gangsters, “hope you guys don’t die~^^”

    “What the fxxk are you talking about” the gangster responded, but Ivan just walk away.

    “So, where were we? Oh yeah…” I said. “What did you call me again?”

    “I said you are little • sissy • doggy~ you fool~” the gangster said, using a childish tone, and the other start laughing, “and you fxxking think that you can take me down huh? Don’t call your mama when you get hurt~ hahaha~”

    “Same to you.” I said, and drew a 5 pointed star. “Ancient Spirits…listen to my request: Summon-Skeleton Warrior!

    A greenish light shoot though the ground and created a 5 points star in front of where I standed, and than a radius of a skeleton try to climb up from the ground. 3 seconds later a living skeleton stand straight up from the soil and holding a sword above its collarbone in front of me.

    “yo…check this out~ a necromancer, let’s see what can a doggy do!” One of the gangster said, and pull out their weapons. Two of them took out a heavy stick and one carry a gun, standing in the back and point it right at Dexter’s head.

    “…Bone Bunker!” Dexter use his special trick, which is a magic that will create a indestructible bone shield around the caster for a short period of time. It had successfully blocked the bullet shoot from the gun.
    The Skeleton Warrior is under attack by two gangsters with a heavy stick, and plus the gun fire in the back, it is destroyed and turns into bone pieces on the ground. But another Skeleton shows up again from the pervious summon circle with a war hammer. It strongly swung his hammer to the two gangsters who were using a heavy stick; they got take to the air, smash on the wall, and made a deep hole of a shape of two men.
    The guy in the back throws his gun to the Skeleton Warrior, but that didn’t stop its movement toward to him.

    “Tough doggy~ better watch out~!” He screamed. “Fire Blast!

    The Skeleton Warrior falls apart as the fire, shoot from the gangster’s hand, touch it, so is the Bone Bunker. Dexter was shocked in that moment because he didn’t expected to face a Sorcerer (Magician that master on elemental magic), but than he put himself together again and ready for a serious fight.

    “I was surprised too, when I know I have to use magic after all~” said by the gangster, and takes out a wand from his pocket. “you are DEAD!”
    “Will see about that!” Dexter shouted. In the mean time another Skeleton Warrior shows up from the summon circle, and it carries a long metal chain.

    “Is that all you can do? I didn’t even use my wand to cast Fire Blast and it turns your skeleton into dust~” the gangster speak, with an overconfident face.

    “Maybe you can take care of one at a time, but what about 100?” I asked. “You are lucky enough to see my next trick…” I take out a sliver dagger, and cut a wound on my finger. Scarlet blood comes out immediately. “…but I don’t think you are lucky enough to live though it.”

    “Shut the fxxk up! Fire Ball!

    INFERNO RECKLESS SUMMON!!

    Dexter hit his wounded hand with blood on the ground. A green lightning blast through the soil to form the “Necronomicon Gate”, and the circle had covered the whole area where Dexter and the enemy are standing. Later a humming sound comes out from underground, which is the voice of hundred of Skeleton Warriors climbing through the soil for battle. All this skeletons rise at once. Some of them had block the Fire Ball attack, and the other start engaging the Sorcerer.

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    “You done? That was fast,” Ivan said, standing next to an abandoned building that looks aged and wrecked. “You should found out that there is a Sorcerer in the gang, right?”
    “Ya, thanks for not telling me, so I can risk my life to found out he can use fire magic.” I said with a tired tone. “Anyway, that was a good training on my summoning skill…and reminded the people not to call me ‘doggy’”

    “Bro…sometime you are just over reacted.” Ivan said, and opens the heavy, wooden door of the building.

    Apart-Book Of Darkness-Chapter 3 end.

    虽然有兽说过想知道Ivan作战时的样子...但最後却写了Dexter的...>"< 有啥意见请回应哦~谢谢!
    P.S. 有找不完的错字+文法错误, 请抓到多少得多少...>"< 感谢~![url]


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    Re: 第一次寫小文-"Apart"-Book Of Darkness-Chapter 3

    如果這些翻成中文大概會引起更多讀者的興趣吧?XD
    想不到可愛的(?)Dextor的破壞力也是如此驚人呢(笑)
    期待接下來的發展~


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    Re: 第一次寫小文-"Apart"-Book Of Darkness-Chapte

    引用 作者: 逆狼
    如果這些翻成中文大概會引起更多讀者的興趣吧?XD
    想不到可愛的(?)Dextor的破壞力也是如此驚人呢(笑)
    期待接下來的發展~
    偶想也是, 但偶只会用九方输入法打中文, 要是用中文写文的话手会残废掉 =_=" (有人要翻译吗XD)
    二年级的Dexter己经在修读第四级召唤术了~ 所以哦, 要是不想被骸骨战士拉回地獄的话, 就得小心用词~ ^^ (笑)
    P.S Dexter想不到是可愛的~XD
    感谢回应!


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    Re: 第一次寫小文-"Apart"-Book Of Darkness-Chapte

    引用 作者: freelancer
    but if you mass it up than it will be your fault
    is this"mess it up"?


    悠久之風】〈首席幕僚〉〈黑月之王〉【鳴雷‧起】

    我不承認我替代了啊庫.
    在他回來向我表明之前, 我只會坐在首席幕僚的位子上.
    不管追到天崖海角我都會把你追回來的!
    該死的臭啊庫, 看到了就馬上給我滾回來--!!!

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    Re: 第一次寫小文-"Apart"-Book Of Darkness-Chapte

    引用 作者: 库洛斯
    is this"mess it up"?
    ERROR FIXED. Thanks for report! ^^
    错误己更正, 感谢! ^^


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